crit of my final suspended typeface and rationale

communicates the word well
deemed successful as it can be used in the context of the word and in an organised structure
love the meaning behind it
maybe add boxes around the other letterforms, as the 'A' feels different from the rest
add the details about what typeface my design is based upon
approach to the word was clever and created a beautiful typeface- that is unique
love the way the 'K,m,u' look and should take these and redesign the rest in order to be consistent
reminding of a simple type or paths
shorten the rationale in places, with writing more about Erik Spiekermann
further explain type in rationale
show the typeface on grids - shows more of the structure
with the 'z' need to sort out the spacing of the top and the curves