group presentation feedback

The feedback given from the group pitch of the exhibition branding was;

does it need to be unhooked, can it not slide instead
reconsider netting - it would go low
poster would be more effective if showing the frame and the mapping of the exhibition that was shown in the presentation for the concept, which relates the subjectivity aspect of the branding
if the poster was the illustration- when people see it they would recognise the structure
like how the exhibition has a research question - with evidence at the end with the results from the exhibition
create the poster at the end of the exhibition, from the results??
how the half tone relates to the concept is effective
cut back to the grid
the poster is 'fashiony'
stripping it back
the catalogue and invite don't fit together
the colour of the invite is better
the folding of the invite is nice- is there a way of incorporating the subjectivity with finding different ways to fold it - which dictates the place of the object in the category in the catalogue
with having the objects placed in the sub categories it gets rid of the subjectivity
instead of the flags moving could the description/caption change - adds the interaction

From the feedback it is clear that the branding could have been simplified with the use of the exhibition planning illustrations to be used as part of the branding. Also, the logistics of the exhibition was too ambitious, with idea of the netting not being practical. Overall, the presentation was presented professionally and had clarity. The group worked well throughout the week, with everyone working on their tasks of which followed the branding core values, that created a overall interesting idea and concept for the branding with ease.