Feedback on the first draft of the brief

interesting but broad topic so should try and narrow it down

look at the psychology of hand written type/calligoraphy - how we write etc 

personalisation - interaction in the book for the reader

with the stock- if more decorative type - thinner stock - psychological representation

processes of the years

the sense of being good in the craft- showing how practising one thing takes time to get nearest to perfection - show the time took - representing the mental strength- laboured 

reflecting movement - gestures - sweeps- move in some way

what you need to create - the arm/fingers etc 

the way peoples hand moves whilst writing

the trapped in surburbia book

mont blanc- making pens

tuba Auerbach article

materials of the tips of the pens, how they are made 

diff pens/same design/diff people

focusing on the celebrating of the craft

can maybe go into the idea of how to convey movement more not just on the hand writing

how to get the readers to move the book etc to convey the sense of movement

like the idea of the dance book etc