final crit of publication

glossy paper-keepsake

pamphlet- with the images & a map
would be able to mass produce if pamphlet
liked the contrast in styles
map on the back of the posters - maybe get the shop owners to draw it out
use the techniques used on the front for the back
modernist magazine research
bellyband works- the concept is good
try small and big maps as may have a problem with legibility
like the glossy pictures as personal
have a big map to bind or to include- with a little section on the back
pictures in a lil book to not overwhelm
the 'posters' that have been replicated are good, especially the gold leaf replicated one
with the posters out of context works- the reader can take the posters and almost bring it in order to find it in the market - interaction
like what you find in a tourist information centre - in a package - not bound
advertise things- like what shops are selling
gift with packet
random deals- like avocados etc
have the mini booklet- with like the cut outs - wouldn't give them separately
good with the learning outcome

I agree with most of the feedback and suggestions given, with experimenting with the map concept being useful to the development of the publication thus far, however I'm not too sure on the ideas of having the photos bound together, however I will test this idea out for variation. Also, I'm not too sure on wether having random deals would fit into the aesthetic of the publication, and it may rise the problem of being overwhelming for the reader.

from this feedback I'm going to:

test out with having a map on the back of the posters by :

using the techniques / not using the techniques and printing normally
having it fit the whole back etc or having it small
or by having the map separately or by wrapping the content

how to have the pictures combined together.... having the cut out thing... or having a mini booklet
test out - as don't want to take away from the not bound concept of which was stated was effective