Wireframe crit

solid idea, really interesting and quite helpful
when making these wireframes it would have been useful to see how it would look on a phone
the way you've presented the wireframes however made me understand what was happening immediately
not sure what the cracked screen wireframe is
how can you give these a more polished look
need more of a sequence of images so that the links and options are easy to understand from the page rather than screen
love the sausage roll theme - maybe make the wire frames a bit clearer
could it expand past sausage rolls and into other Greggs food?
could you reserve a sausage roll?
do you need to put in your address or does the map work based on gps?
simplicity of design is effective
would be interesting if could get a sausage roll delivered
could people leave reviews and recommend certain Greggs - star rating
can the app tell you if you can eat in or not?
could there be a reward system - buy 10 sausage rolls get 1 free or other discounts
love it! the illustrations are great and would appeal to the target audience
maybe you should make the tone of voice serious as that would contrast with the fun idea
maybe make the layout of the app more clearer - do more simple wireframes
the user has been considered with the fun content, could the app show extra information such as opening times, how busy it is (like on google maps)
could you buy sausage roll march with the app?!
just sausage rolls, what about steak bakes?
user is concise and this is a genuine issue
why not do all hot goods ad let the user filter to what pastry they feel like
love it! its simple but will be quite helpful, especially for avid Greggs customers, the illustrations are lovely too and go with the playful and humorous tone of voice
maybe use the Greggs typeface
can this extend to other products too - not just sausage rolls
can users prepay? - before going in the shop
could do temp in levels like hot and cold to keep it concise
if a branch runs out can it suggest near beaches in the area to the user?

points to take further:

The suggestions for the app of which I found of interest to experiment with were reserving a sausage roll, reward system, sausage roll merch and suggesting branches in the area. From this feedback it is clear that I need to show more clearly how the certain buttons and features would work, with showing a journey and keeping the design elements consistent throughout. However, all comments stated that they loved the idea and that the illustration works well so this will be continued when developing the app.