Final crit

For the final critique on responsive I showed my response to the wonder book cover brief due to it being the brief that I was most happy with yet wanted little details to be given feedback on , such as the type etc which would make the project outcome stronger

The feedback wrote when giving feedback silently:

feedback given after the silent aspect and I could explain the concept and the reasoning behind my design decisions:

works well as a children's book
have a better colour contrast- with a thicker stroke for the space illustrations- pops out more
use the handwritten type on the back
from far away the space illustrations look like stars - then when close up can see the planets
quotes are placed well as are subtle not obvious
you're is spelt wrong
for the e reader version both hands should be shown and to loose the small text as you won't be able to read it
with the finger that is pointing down maybe move a bit up
the hands clearly communicate what I'm trying to say with the helping element
on the spine perhaps using a helmet instead as it is more significant of an inconography
the type on the bend of the hand is too harsh so the corners more rounded???
perhaps less flat of the type with using markers and scanned in etc- so shows more of an imperfection
the yellow of the stars could be foiled to make them stand out even more and for the contrast