could write more about the theories- what it is used for and how do you create the grid
more research than collages
some more colour
layout the publication in order depending what grid systems they follow
split where the research ends to my work as its unclear which is yours
use of paper types and acetate is interesting
really good research into the grid systems - shows in depth understanding
maybe annotate the grids
very complex research
'sick blue designs'
good that there is a range of colours
experiment with type more
link grid systems to research
try digital experiments
From this feedback, it is clear that I need to layout my publication in more distinct sections, to demonstrate the work better. Also, I should experiment more with colours as the most liked thing about my publication was the acetate experiments, using colour to overlay, so perhaps doing more layering and more collages in order to experiment more would enhance the publication. Also, using the idea of annotating the grid, may show my understanding more of the grid systems and I could use acetate for example to show the grids in the magazine examples.
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