Comments given about my publication:
good colour combination
print out in different sizes
The experiment with the colour background worked really well
may work well with animation
show the gradient for the clothes
really good publication
practical work is at a very high level and have executed to a high standard
evaluate test against the theory and how the 3 that I've chosen relates to the tests
I have put much time and effort with the practical and left the writing on the side
How it links to the theory and why
photographs show very good photography skills
do more experimentations to show the theories- perhaps not in denim
evaluate the tests and explain if it worked well and showed the theory well
aesthetics and colour palette is retained throughout
From the comments, I am going to work on my explanations, in order to make it clear on the theory and how I have interpreted it successfully with my practical work. Also, making sure that the corresponding colour theories with the photos is more obvious, so by using a subtle title for example.
However, with the comments that I should do more experimentation with different objects, I think it would give more variance however may ruin the 'fashion' aesthetic throughout, with too much ideas perhaps. With the comment that the publication would work as an animation, I am going to produce a gif which will show off the aesthetic in a different way.
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