5 posters Crit

                                                            

comments from the peer crit:

for the last one : do collage then put the pic over the top
scanning in etc
classed as the worst one
could add the text on the phone
for the 4th one (blue one) : make paths and add the text to follow the shapes, and then delete the shape afterwards
use different mediums to combine into one
for the 3rd one (phone with squiggles) : put the text in between the lines
distorting it
have the text be the squiggles
using old phones as the photo as it stands doesn't quite work
for the 1st: move the position of the text

ideas in general :
silhouettes of snapchat filters
silhouettes of things found on a phone - like the messaging symbol
change conventions of a poster - scrolling down/left or right for the layout of the poster
using things on your phone which isn't for its first use
bad quality photos
apple phone box
effects put on photos
filters on image
snapchat
poster rounded like a Mac/iphone
double sided?
different ways text can be used on phone- like naming the folders

From this feedback, it is clear of how I can incorporate text into my designs, as that was a problem when creating them. Also, to think more of how you can take the concept of phones and use them as you shouldn't to create something interesting, such as using the silhouettes of snapchat filters. To develop these posters, I will incorporate the ideas of how to place the text, and to also develop the 'squiggle' one more as that was the one found with the most potential, whilst also trying the new ideas, such as the snapchat filters in order to create a poster which challenges the conventions of a poster and suggests an auditory experience and social interaction.