-ambitious
-love the idea
-nice paper stock-more heavy- the thickness and high quality reflect the idea of a gift, with the hardback cover working well
-bounded from the side of the tag
-could have had used ribbon to bind it
-could have used two of the patterns mixed together
-make the book shorter as it gets quite repetitive
-better as a small ring bind, thinner paper
-consistent colour scheme
-binding more professionally - using the laser guillotine
From the feedback, I agree that maybe it would have been better to bind the publication on the side to make the read more easier. Also the binding could have been more polished, with using the laser guillotine, which would have made a better final outcome. However, the feedback that the book should be shorter I don't agree with as the narrative might have become lost, and the content is all different patterns, incorporating the 26 images in an ambitious way, so I think it is interesting enough to keep you engaged.
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