group critique of the publication development and the 3rd initial idea

try printing on a lighter stock
use adobe bridge to try and get the images all the same colour, or get rid of the background
experiment with wrapping paper and Kraft paper - glossy finish
maybe bind with a hole and ring
the title and narrative is interesting with the publication being different
perhaps wrap the publication up
for the third : look more into how it would practically work in a publication, however ideas are good
another ida for the 26 characters is a concertina, using the images already taken

From this feedback, the images will be experimented with using Kraft paper and wrapping paper to see the finish and difference on these stocks. Also, the images should be edited to make sure the finish isn't as dark, so the backgrounds will be removed to try and prevent this problem. Also, the images should be printed on a lighter stock, with the binding to be taken into consideration. Also, the third publication needs to be thought more about, with the ideas needing to be developed into mock ups.